- Drop words like ‘to’ and ‘and’ from the end of sentences so that there is more balance and so that the sentences are presented in a way that is compatible with speech.
- Use a grid as at the moments the captions are slightly out of line (more noticeable with a digital version)
- Where captions sit at the top is important, not in relation to the bottom of the sentence.
- Colour matching for when the document is printed.
My response to the feedback:
I appreciate the feedback, especially about the small details as I think it will help elevate my folio in terms of the visual harmony it adds to it. I will go through my document in great detail making sure everything is aligned with a grid, with a consistency to everything and that all the type reads well.